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Remembering The Old Days

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Roots of all Bright and Glorious by QAoAJewels of Allitila by QAoA
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Canon
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CanoScan LiDE 120
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Now this I can critique seeing as it has human's. This is a beautiful piece of art. The stain glass window is symbolic and a nice touch. The two people embracing look like they are in a kind of romantic situation, it looks good. I am amazed at how the hair turned out, the blonde hair looks realistic compared to some depictions, the anatomy of the couple are spot on, the detail in the clothing is what I find breath taking as wrinkles and intricate patters are hard to make work usually.
That said, there are some things I have to point out that could have been done better. If you notice the blonde man's exposed are appears to fan out ever so slightly, I know that sort of thing is hard to draw, but in the future I would suggest keeping in mind that the forearm is mostly straight on the underside while the upper flares up slightly and then swoops towards the wrist and slight downward slope compared to the initial bulge. While I said the anatomy looks spot on, it sadly looks slightly flat, o the girls back you made her shirt look like fabric with slight folds in curtain areas, it would have looked more realistic if you had done the same on her arm, I know that it can be very hard to do without overdoing it, buy perhaps having it sag slightly lower than the arm that is underneath it and adding crease marks to indicate a lack of an arm in that sag would make it look all the more like cloth, if you applied that principle to all the arms they would look more like three dimensional and convincing.
Every piece of art is a learning experience, this art is a wonderful piece with easily forgivable and minor mistakes, you never seas to amaze me with these pictures and I love them. As a growing artist myself I hope someday I can figure out how to pull of hair as well as you.